Tuesday, July 31, 2012

Masque of the Red Death (Bethany Griffin)

Title: Masque of the Red Death
Author: Bethany Griffin
Publisher: Greenwillow Books (HarperCollins)
Length: 319 pages
Rating: 3/5

A plague has destroyed most of the world, including Araby’s twin brother. Resolved to never experience anything her brother can’t, Araby attends glittery parties with other wealthy survivors in the hopes of finding oblivion. She finds her vow hard to keep after friending Will, the handsome proprietor of the Debauchery Club, and Elliot, a wealthy aristocrat determined to start a revolution.

I really wanted to like this book and there were several moments that I loved it. But mostly, I loved the idea but didn’t love the follow-through. This book had so much potential because it contained most the things I look for in a good book: a strong female character who is willing to take risks, handsome men vying for the lead’s attention, beautiful costumes, mystery, revolution, and it’s based on Edgar Allan Poe’s short story, “The Mask of the Red Death.”

But it was just so messy. Character’s personalities weren’t clear or changed through the book, the dialogue was unbelievable, and the amount of times the author conveniently brought characters together but didn’t make the most of it was terribly frustrating. There was not enough continuity and I couldn’t get into the story like I wanted to. And then the book ended without a conclusion, only more problems- a bit like the story as a whole.

1 comment:

  1. I felt the same way! Such a great premise that was so poorly executed. I was really hoping for a better story with this one as well :( It had a couple of shining moments, but the atrocious dialogue, poorly thought-out characters, and confusing pace made it pretty disappointing.